以下摘自某網上大陸大學教材:
綠綫為 discourse markers
藍綫為 idiomatic usages
紅線為 grammar mistakes
可見, 大陸人嘅英語水平大概為 CEFR B1,
喺 IELTS Banding 大約為 5.5
Proofreading:
as --> as to
society. So --> society, so
have difficulty in --> have difficulty
could have --> would have
graduate school --> graduate schools
The essay above will earn an F grade in HKASL UE.